User:Kristen112211/The beef cattle industry in Canada/Gwood3710 Peer Review

I know this is a new page and only the first draft of contributions, but for the sake of consistency, I'm going to review as if it's your final draft, but again, I know you're probably not finished so some things I say you likely already know/ have thought about adding.

Lead

Lead section is clear and to the point.

Today

Does the Today section cover all of the below text? or is some of it there for future page organization? If it does cover all of it below, perhaps look at creating extra categories to guide the reader to the specific information they want.

Additionally, a category such as "today" may be out dated in the future (e.g. new censuses, etc...) so perhaps only referring to the category of information and then referring to historical information separately if you want to emphasize date.

Cow-Calf Production

what are some of the common/ highly sought after characteristics? any special significances of them?

Current trends

When is current? perhaps dates of publications could guide and help readers understand the time frame of these facts.

Finishing operations

what is the market weight? Is this being the most intensive part referenced in ^9? might want to double reference it when its being stated as a fact.

what is contained within the specialized diet?

Farm economics in canada

reference for first sentence?

Innovation in breading management

its own section with the following text? or to be edited?

Innovation in host genetics

"unfortunately" takes away from neutrality

Innovations in diet and structure

"industry&amp;#39;s" typo

I know I added a lot to the review and some little picky things, but I think you have plenty of information already considering it's a new page and not even the first draft yet so not a major amount left to do! since I know nothing about the cattle industry, I marked down every question that came to mind so that your page is clear enough even someone with no knowledge like me can learn from it. Overall, its looking great! with some wikipedia type organization and adding some more clarification to some points, you'll be all set:) good luck!!