User:Kristen112211/The beef cattle industry in Canada/Juwanm Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kristen112211


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kristen112211/The_beef_cattle_industry_in_Canada?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Not applicable

Clarity
The writing is clear and includes important information that clearly covers the topic. Well done! I think removing the first sentence in the lead can be helpful, since the worldwide perspective is not discussed in this article. Rearranging the rest of the sentences can make the lead more clear, but good job at highlighting the objective of the article!

Structure
I am extremely impressed by the outline and content provided in this article. Great synthesis of structure, especially the inclusion of detailed relevant data and statistics. The structure flows well, and the information in the paragraph is well organized. Minor grammatical edits may help with the flow of the sentences, but overall impressive!

Balanced Coverage
The article covers an excellent range of topics in different aspects of the industry. all the sections are well balanced, and have equal coverage and all aspects are balances. Continue expanding on the content, it's looking great!

Neutrality
The writing is factual and does not hold any bias or opinions. Clear and concise writing that is neutral.

Suggestions for Improvement
Impressive work! Really well organized, and balanced throughout. I appreciated the coverage of different topics relating to the cattle industry in Canada. I suggest adding hyperlinks to unfamiliar terms in order to redirect readers to relevant articles. I'm sure you'll also be editing the format (headings) later on, which will make the the article easy to read. Great work!