User:Kristinavalle22/Forensic serology/Bella LC Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kristinavalle22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kristinavalle22/Forensic_serology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Forensic serology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I agree that the leading paragraph needs some work. I like your suggestion to change the ending scentence. It could be more clear while still not being overly detailed.

The contents of the article are pretty good and I agree that those lines needed to be fixed. The "Urine Detection" section is quite a bit less detailed than the other pages and I think more information should be added.

In the opening scentence, all of the different body fluids are listed where DNA can be extracted. Should each of these not be included in the article? Only blood, semen, saliva and urine have their own sections. There are no sections for breast milk, vomit, fecal matter and persperation.

Overall, good assessment of the article!

From Kristinavalle22: Thank you for this review, it was very helpful. The urine section is less detailed because there is only one validated method for urine analysis that is considered presumptive, and there are also no confirmatory tests, so there is not much to discuss. I fixed the beginning paragraph to state only the bodily fluids that were talked about during the article. Thanks again!