User:Krobb22/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Am Spiegelgrund clinic

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(I chose this article to evaluate because this is the article that my group will be editing. The article talks about the Am Spiegelgrund clinic which was a place where hundreds of children were murdered under child euthanasia in Nazi Germany. It matters because it's important for people to be aware of the unethical practices that took place during WWII and honor the lives that were lost. The article is organized yet it is also short and the the "Leading personnel" section is in bullet points which doesn't match the formatting of the rest of the article.

Evaluate the article
The introduction of the article is brief and gives and overview of the Am Spiegelgrund clinic. All of the sections of the article are relevant to the topic without putting too much weight on one part. There is not many academic sources and some things that are mentioned in the article aren't expanded on. The background section is short and the "Leading personnel" section is formatted in bullet points which disrupts the flow of the article. The article is rated S meaning that there is substantial room for improvement. Overall, the article is decent. While the content of the article is informative, more information can be added to expand the page. More reliable, academic sources can also improve the article and changing the format of the article to paragraph form will make it flow better.