User:Krone035/Low-Nutrient, Low-Chlorophyll (LNLC) Regions/Jordamal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Beepbeep97, Krone035, Laurelceleste22, Roag98, Tenshorts


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Krone035/Low-Nutrient,_Low-Chlorophyll_(LNLC)_Regions?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Low-Nutrient, Low-Chlorophyll (LNLC) Regions

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is very concise and organized. The information flows well throughout the article and none of the information provided seems like it is out of place. There is an abundance of relevant sources used to support your page (as recent as earlier this year). Not many images were used, but the ones that were included were useful in relating LNLC regions to general biogeochemical concepts. However, some of the captions associated with the images could be more descriptive to link to the text rather than having to read through for a full understanding. Hyperlinks were used well throughout, each of which were relevant to the information provided.

Edits: Some of the captions could be more descriptive. Check for usage of subjective wording (can, may, etc.) throughout text.