User:Krone035/Low-Nutrient, Low-Chlorophyll (LNLC) Regions/Kellyshan31 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Krone035


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Krone035/Low-Nutrient,_Low-Chlorophyll_(LNLC)_Regions?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The introductory paragraph is a good summary of the topic and is concise.
 * Can include a link to a page on coccolithophores.
 * "The respiration of organic carbon removes DIC which raises pH and the concentration of carbonate ions therefore lowering CO2 concentration in the atmosphere and surface waters" is a bit of a run-on.
 * Maybe a link to a page on upwelling or Ekman suction and downwelling or Ekman pumping?
 * There are two different statements about how much of the ocean is made up of LNLC regions, one says sixty percent and one says seventy five.
 * Can probably link a wiki page to "gyres".
 * Maybe give a little bit more background on subtropical gyres in particular, since these are a focus. Like their geography, how they differ from other gyres, etc.
 * Link a wiki page to diazotrophs.
 * Link a wiki page to nitrogenase.
 * Link a wiki page to eddies.
 * Could explain the meaning of "new nitrogen" further when you mention it in the N. Atlantic Subtropical Gyre section.
 * Check comma placement throughout. "a major source of new nitrogen in the Sargasso Sea comes from the N2-fixing cyanobacteria Trichodesmium" should have a comma before Trichodesmium.
 * It seems like the South Pacific Gyre section could use more content, unless research on it is too scarce to find more info.
 * For each of the monitoring programs, it would be good to include some major findings that each one has discovered since their origin.