User:Kryn96/Early Ceramic Period (Kansas)/Acuna1316 Peer Review

1) Good introduction into the main topic in the first paragraph

2) Good details on specific topics of the early ceramic period such as pottery

3) Credible and reliable sources

1) Obscure topics could use hyperlinks

2) Small number of sources

3) Use of the words such as 'we' in the first paragraph feel out of place

1) Add more information on topics such as ceremonial burials

2) Add hyperlinks on words such as 'atlatl'

3) Add more sources if possible