User:Ksaldan3/Old Kiyyangan Village, Philippines/Gcecchi2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ksaldan3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ksaldan3/Old_Kiyyangan_Village%2C_Philippines?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Currently there seems to be no lead written yet for this article. This article goes straight into talking about the people of the Old Kiyyangan Village. Even though there is no lead paragraph yet, the paragraphs that are written do relate to the topic at hand and provides good information on said topic. In the Burial Orientation paragraph, someone with the last name Echavarri is mentioned talking about her conclusions about the site. There is no previous knowledge on who this Echavarri person is, or where she's from. This is useful for the article to mention briefly and link to another Wikipedia page, if possible, to allow readers to see who is studying a site and if they are secure source of information. This article is written in a neutral tone so no work needed there. A good job is done at just stating the facts that surround this site without trying to persuade someone to viewing this site a certain way. All of the sources that were used are recent and do relate to the Old Kiyyangan Village as well. This article, while not long, contained a good amount of information and was easy to absorb and understand. Images will help this page greatly, as it is always nice to have visuals. Also it could help to have visuals/map of the location of the Old Kiyyangan Village. This article does have enough sources to fall under Wikipedia's Notability requirement. There are currently no links to any other Wikipedia page. Adding these links could help out a lot to give some more background knowledge to readers in order to understand the content of your article more. This article is well written and does a very good job in showing the influence that European colonizers had on a culture but also the cultural practices that survived.