User:Ksaldan3/Old Kiyyangan Village, Philippines/Skoobie03 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ksaldan3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ksaldan3/Old_Kiyyangan_Village%2C_Philippines?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
This a great start to an article. The lead was intriguing and told me what the rest of the article was about. Yes some of the sections are just a heading, but this is not the final draft and the heading names told me what to expect once information was added. The tone is balanced and neutral. The info provided was concise and led me wanting to know more. I like how you have added references and told the us where you plan on using those sources. I would like to see images of some artifacts, location on a map, and whatever is relevant to the site. These I am sure will be added once we have an open source site for that material. This article is admittedly in better shape than mine, but not by much. I do appreciate the fact that you have laid out an outline and can show what sources will be used. Keep plugging along and adding information.