User:Kschmick

Being bold is important on Wikipedia.

Articles for improvement
Latvia:
 * More citations
 * More subheadings
 * References aren't all formatted correctly

Christopher Wilder:
 * Could include section detailing how he was found out
 * Some small grammatical errors
 * Lead could be longer
 * Could include section comparing him to similar serial killers
 * More credible citations

My Articles

 * Human resource management
 * The New Yorker
 * Intertextuality

Problems

 * Lead section is too long
 * "Weasel words"
 * Some broad claims in areas

To-Do List

 * Reduce lead section (Completed 3/19/18)
 * Redistribute info that should be kept (Completed 3/19/18)
 * General copyediting (Completed 3/20/18)
 * Fix run-on sentences (Completed 3/20/18)
 * Check references (Completed 3/2/18)
 * Check for bias (Completed 3/2/18)
 * Fix certain broad claims (Completed 3/20/18)

Problems

 * Doesn't read like a Wikipedia article -- more like a research paper
 * Citations don't follow Wikipedia Manual of Style
 * Some original research

To-Do List

 * General copyediting (Completed 3/20/18)
 * Check references (Completed 3/2/18)
 * Change some in-text citations to follow Wikipedia Manual of Style (Completed 3/15/18)
 * Check for bias (Completed 3/2/18)
 * Evaluate subheadings -- some are a bit short (Completed 3/15/18)
 * Restructure layout (Completed 3/15/18)
 * Get rid of original research (3/21/18)
 * Add history section (Completed 3/15/18)