User:Kschwar/Emissions target/Thehandwordandlaw Peer Review

Peer Review Emissions Target KSchwar

Hey Kayden,

I reviewed the working draft you had in your sandbox, so these comments you may or may not already take into account as you finalize your draft

Lead:

Lead is well written. Could there be a sentence added that shows more directly what an Emissions Target is - ie. a number, a percentage, an equation.

Nice work differentiating between existing article on Emissions Budget, makes it clear this article is notable

Sections:

Calculation of Emissions Targets very clear and well-written. NDCs acronym should be defined in this section, the first time it is used

Effectiveness of targets is a good section on the controversy surrounding emissions targets.

Sources:

Great list of sources, these are all peer reviewed articles and there is a wealth of information written on the subject

The article remains neutral while explaining some of the issues surrounding emissions targets and their effectiveness

Overall the article could be developed by additional users moving forward. But this is a good start, and the list of sources provides alot of information for adding to the article in future

- Brian A

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kschwar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kschwar/Emissions_target?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Emissions target