User:Ksihapanya/Kaoru Ishikawa/Scout26 Peer Review

General info
Ksihapanya
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ksihapanya/Kaoru Ishikawa
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kaoru Ishikawa

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the additions that you have made. I think a picture would be a good idea. I also think that splitting the biography section up might be a good idea. Most articles have a career section to talk about the person's career specifically. I think it is mixed in with the biography and it may be more useful to remove it and give it its own section. Other than those few things, I think your edits are great.