User:Kskornyes/Cuban Literacy Campaign/Gorditagirl21 Peer Review

General info

 * User:Kskornyes
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Cuban Literacy Campaign

Lead
The content improved was the organization section.

Content

 * The content added is relevant, up-to-date. The content added provided a more well-rounded and complete article.

Tone and Balance

 * The content added is neutral and there does not appear to be any bias towards a particular position. There is just facts presented.

Sources and References

 * All the new content is backed by reliable secondary sources, they are current and the links do work.

Organization

 * The organization is well-written, concise, straight to the point, clear, and easy to read. The organization structure within the Organization section is well-thought out and adds a more in-depth look into the organization structure as a whole and ties that specific section together.

Overall impressions

 * The content added improved the overall quality of the article, it made it more well-rounded and more complete. The strengths of the content added are the structure within the section, the numbers used, and the breakdown of the types of players was a well added touch. Like always, there can be a more in-depth study, but it is a Wikipedia article.