User:Ksoccer22/Tetralogy of Fallot/Gracehelgeson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ksoccer22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ksoccer22/Tetralogy_of_Fallot?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tetralogy of Fallot

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the sources section, one of the sources is underlined red (the date may need to be fixed) so I would check that out. There are a couple of spelling errors (underlined in red) so I would fix those as well.

Great information, very easy to read and understand. I would maybe break it up into different sections, for example, having a section called 'Genetics' and putting the information about genetics under that section, or 'Risk Factors' and list the risk factors and environmental factors for the disease.

On the top, I would maybe include a 'Lead' section and put the main points of what you wrote under this section.

When you mention Down Syndrome, Digeorge's Syndrome, or any other type of syndrome, I would use the link option to link it to the Wikipedia definition of those, so the reader can easily click on it and understand it more.

Overall, I think you did a great job on creating the Epidemiology section of this Wiki page.