User:Ksoccer22/Tetralogy of Fallot/WLepidemiology Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ksoccer22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ksoccer22/Tetralogy of Fallot


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Tetralogy of Fallot

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article stays on point with no distractions very well. You put together a great list of sources which are relevant and useful and did a good job with in-text citation. One suggestion I have is to work on the flow of the article with transitions or possibly a little elaboration, as the overall flow of the article is a bit choppy. I would also suggest reviewing the spelling and grammar as I believe there are a few misspelled or accidental words. Separating different parts of this addition into more accurate categories could also be useful rather than the broad topic: “epidemiology.”