User:Ksomo/Chinese patriarchy/Ksomo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(NatalieCampbell)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:NatalieCampbell/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chinese patriarchy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The analysis of Confucianism and the timeline of the status of women. In particular, we will introduce the history of Confucianism.

Content

In the past, families were patriarchal and women were powerless. But as time went on, women were gradually treated in the same way.

Sources and References

I think these sources are also more specific.

Organization

There is a lack of strong evidence for the details of women's rights. Everything else is perfect.