User:Ksomo/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The White Haired Girl/Crows and Sparrows

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Due to China's Internet restrictions, there are some information barriers to the outside world's understanding of China's nations films. I hope to do something and be able to help.

Evaluate the article
The background article of "The White-Haired Girl" is very detailed, but I think there still have room for improvement. Here is my suggestions, hope it can help.


 * In the aspect of plot, it only mention the ballet opera of The white Haired Girl which there is very different to the film version.The film version only being mention not bing specific describe at the part of "Connections and Differences to the Film", it could be improve by put the film version's plot behind the ballet version, let people have a more intuitive understanding of the development and difference between two versions performance form of The White Haired Girl.


 * There are too few data references, some are in unavailable condition or even unrelated. Unavailable links are very important primary sources of information, which caused impossible for the mentioned information to use secondary resources to verify the credibility and temporal status of the mentioned information. Such as this one, https://cn.nytimes.com/china/20151111/c11sino-white/en-us/


 * Overall this article is using appropriately understandable way to introduce The White Haired Girl, but it still need to update the sources.

The background article of "Crows and Sparrows" is very detailed, but I think there still have room for improvement. Here is my views, hope it can help.
 * The film was made during a period of political turmoil in China, and once the state regime changes, no one knows what will happen. While most people still see it as a political propaganda film made by Zhen Junli for embracing the CCP, going back to that era, the film can also be seen as a hope to give people the courage to fight injustice and oppression. It evokes good wishes for the future, satirizes social crises and comforts those who are suffering. People want to fight for their lives, but they need someone to unite them and seek support, so this movie came about because of a political need and a civilian need. I think this may help more readers understand the background of the times.
 * Overall this article is easy to read, but not suitable for people who don't know modern Chinese history, it still needs more unbiased comments and historically relevant background.