User:Ksomo/The wandering earth/Haojun1997 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ksomo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ksomo/The_wandering_earth?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Wandering Earth

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Ksomo! Here's my peer review for you,

Content

 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? -Yes, so far I see the imformation about the movie is relevant to rhe topic and you did a good job on it.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?- so far it is up to date. But you can try to add the upcoming The Wandering Earth 2 and saying that it is the second part of the movie and is coming up.
 * You can try to upload more photo of the film or the picture of the main cast and catching viewer's eyes.

Tone and Balance

 * Is the content added neutral?- Yes
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?- No it is all balanced.
 * Good job

Organization

 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?- Yes it easy to read. And try to going through the page and try to correct some grammar mistakes.

Overall impressions

 * Overall is a good Wiki page to telling the background of the film, and it is easy to read the article and knowing what's goning on to the movie.