User:Ksomo/The wandering earth/Sales.Alf Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Ksomo)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ksomo/The_wandering_earth?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Wandering Earth

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Given the amount of detail already existing on the current article, the article draft provides a unique new section on socially relevant matters such as nationalism in cinema. The article draft is very well-written and remains neutral throughout the entirety of the article. The strengths of this article lies mostly in the summarization and application of academic sources to provide a much more detailed understanding of the film. I find the conclusion to be unnecessary and could instead be added to the lead section at the start of the article which summarizes the film. Adding more sections might help to make the article draft easier to organize the information being presented.)