User:Ksullivan0/Climate change in the Philippines/Dimahal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: Ksullivano0

Bibliography


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ksullivan0/Climate change in the Philippines
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Climate change in the Philippines

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think you did a great job with your addition to this wiki article. It is easy to comprehend and provided context on an important topic that was needed on this page. I broke my feedback down by the provided sections to make it easier to read:

Content:

As stated previously, your section adds an important expansion on the economic impacts section of the page. I especially appreciated how you began your addition by providing a definition for readers to build their understanding off of. Including the provinces of Bohol, Maguindanao, and Cotabato provide a new perspective from underrepresented provinces in the overall article. The hyperlinks are helpful too! I couldn't find any grammar issues.

Tone and Balance:

The tone is neutral. No biases, overrepresentation, or underrepresentation is evident.

References:

All of your sources are recent, with the exception of #7 which is understandable because it is giving a historical overview. Because of the timelines I'm confident the information is up to date. There is an appropriate amount of sources for the section's length and all the links I checked worked.

I think you're good to post, thank you for sharing your work with me!