User:Kt1628/Uranium mining and the Navajo people/Erobertson222 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Kt1628

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/Jupiter2457


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kt1628/Uranium_mining_and_the_Navajo_people?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Uranium mining and the Navajo people

Evaluate the drafted changes
From reading the draft in your sandbox, I think you guys are off to a good start. Acknowledging the problems that the Navajo Nation is facing while including real members of the tribe adds to having quality resources. I feel that this is neutral content while stating that the tribe isn't in good shape and are being put on the back burner all while not showing any sign of persuasion but straight facts. As for improvement, I feel that the original article has a lot of content already so I would suggest minor improvements in wherever you think it is needed. All together, I think that your contribution ties together the whole article.