User:Kt1628/Uranium mining and the Navajo people/Guerita1188 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kt1628 and Jupiter2457


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kt1628/Uranium_mining_and_the_Navajo_people?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Uranium mining and the Navajo people

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the content that has been added is a good start, and has good information that fills gaps in the current article. There are some obvious typos throughout the article that should be fixed. You definitely do a great job with citations, and every claim has a reliable source. I think that the second paragraph in your draft is a bit jumbled and could definitely use some more information to give a better explanation, as I found it a bit confusing. Maybe it will make more sense once it is entered into the main article as well. The information added is definitely in a neutral tone, and I think you are on the right track.