User:Kuklo018/Freddy McConnell/Cjones1015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Kuklo018


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kuklo018/Freddy_McConnell?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * no previous article

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article is very well done and organized. The amount of information you presented it impressive and it is obvious how hard you worked on the page. It is also very cool that you were able to get first person information from him. You chose a very interesting topic and undoubtedly added valuable information to Wikipedia. I find the information on the court case to in particular interesting. I think you also chose two great images for the article.