User:Kuklo018/Freddy McConnell/Kizzardly Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bistr012, Kuklo018, Wentl015

User:Kuklo018/Freddy McConnell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kuklo018/Freddy McConnell
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Freddy McConnell

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The content of your page is very good. I like the headings and sections you have chosen. I think adding a "personal life" section might also be worthwhile, if you can find any other details about his life that don't fit into your other categories. Your article does a good job of being neutral and simply presenting the information and all of your information seems relevant. Adding some information about any social backlash or media backlash that Freddy may have faced could also be good if there's anything out there about that. Some more in depth information about the Seahorse documentary could also be added, like any more specifics about what was discussed and shown in the film. You have a good amount of sources and lots of in text citations, which all work. Overall your article is well written and neutral. Some information and detail could be added, but it is very clear and informative.