User:Kunikmaddox/Dog whistle (politics)/AStudentSomewhere Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kunikmaddox/Dog whistle (politics)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kunikmaddox/Dog_whistle_%28politics%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * I do not think a current version of the article exists

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it is starting out with a good rhythm. The main thing that needs to be improved about is its current status as it is only a sentence long with one source. Adding some world building information to your beginning of your page would be helpful, like this happened where, when, and with who. I also think an examples should be added to the page to help bridge gaps.