User:Kuroko19148/Chinese cuisine/Dcirum Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kuroko19148


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kuroko19148/Chinese_cuisine?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chinese cuisine

Evaluate the drafted changes
Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?

I did not notice any new information on the lead part and so I think either the information you found on the original page was adequate or you are working on this part at the moment which is okay.

Is the content added relevant to the topic?

I found the information that you added under the 'Relation to Chinese philosophy' rather informative since it gave an in depth description of the importance of food and the regulations surrounding it in the Chinese culture.

Is the content added neutral?

The tone employed is neutral and I did not feel swayed to believe one thing over another.

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?

All the information you added was in fact backed by citation but I noticed you only used one source for about two paragraphs worth of new content. I would suggest probably finding another source or two since this would help corroborate your information even more.

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?

Overall, your contribution to this Wikipedia page has improved the relevance of the article. I realized that you also added citation for previous work that was in the original copy that was not cited which is definitely beneficial for all users that visit this page. Other than incorporating a few more sources, I have no further suggestions and I enjoyed reviewing your content.