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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Ramen


 * Article Evaluation
 * The introduction does not include a brief overview of the major sections like the history and popular culture section. The toppings section need sources to validate what is written there. I think there could possibly be more information added to the popular culture section. The instant ramen section (#7) seems at of place. Should make sure Japanese ramen is not to be confused with Korean ramen.


 * Sources
 * https://ebookcentral-proquest-com.ezproxy2.library.drexel.edu/lib/drexel-ebooks/detail.action?docID=1650799
 * https://www.bitemybun.com/korean-ramen-vs-japanese-ramen/
 * https://www.japan-guide.com/e/e2042.html
 * https://ramenmuseum.nyc/complete-guide-of-ramen-toppings/

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Chinese Cuisine


 * Article Evaluation
 * The introduction does not include a brief overview of the drinks present in Chinese Cuisine. In the history section, the "Zhaohun" wiki page does not exist, so there's a possibility to start it. I feel like the information in the "Cold Dish" section is lacking. I also feel like there can be a section talking about Chinese cuisine traditions throughout a year, and the use of and proper way of chopsticks. In the talk page, it seems that articles on steamed rice and Chinese Festivity Foods are missing.


 * Sources
 * https://ebookcentral-proquest-com.ezproxy2.library.drexel.edu/lib/drexel-ebooks/detail.action?docID=1531172
 * https://www.travelchinaguide.com/tour/food/chinese-cooking/cold-dish.htm
 * https://www.eatingchina.com/recipes/white-rice.htm
 * https://spoonuniversity.com/lifestyle/7-traditional-chinese-holiday-foods-that-have-special-meanings

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Multiplayer Video Games


 * Article Evaluation
 * In introduction should talk a little about the history about multiplayer video games. I feel the non-networked section of the history should be expanded a little to match its importance relative to networked section, and same thing with online multiplayer section. There could possibly be more sources added for asymmetric gameplay to keep that section. Maybe I could add a section on the social impact multiplayer video games has on the people. And I feel like there should be more images present throughout the page.


 * Sources
 * https://link-springer-com.ezproxy2.library.drexel.edu/article/10.1007/BF01408520
 * https://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2007/09/070915110957.htm

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Autumn


 * Article Evaluation
 * I think I can expand the tourism section that primarily focuses on things in the the United States. And since this article should primarily focus on things within the United States, I feel like the introduction should be edited as it talks as northern and southern hemisphere.


 * Sources
 * https://travel.usnews.com/rankings/best-fall-getaways/
 * https://www.britannica.com/science/autumn-season
 * https://www.bustle.com/articles/185245-7-symbolic-meanings-of-autumn-that-remind-us-how-amazing-this-season-really-is
 * https://www.twinkl.com/teaching-wiki/autumn

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Shiba Inu


 * Article Evaluation
 * The introduction should include a brief overview of the history related to the dog. There should be a section about their diet as well as Shina Inu as a hunting dog (like their prey, what they are liked, how they are trained, etc.) There can maybe be a section explaining the dog as a pet.


 * Sources
 * https://www.pumpkin.care/dog-breeds/shiba-inu/