User:Kurt Krautmann/Eutrophication/Aderush Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kurt Krautmann


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kurt%20Krautmann/Eutrophication?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The author has a great introduction sentence and it is straight to the point of what the readers will be learning about. I think the author was able to organize all the details in the separate paragraphs and provided just enough details for readers to understand the topic and not confuse them. Going in depth on one example of a lake or study that has used this aluminum sulfate treatment might provide a little bit more context and grasp on the topic for readers. There are some great references added however I would recommend adding a few more that are more current. The content seems to be a bit biased at this point towards the usage of this treatment but I am curious if there are any drawbacks or negative environmental impacts?

There are a few spelling errors so I would suggest the author re-read one more time to find those. But overall I think this article is at a great starting point and there is a lot of really good information in it. I especially like the addition of links to definitions I think those are thoughtful additions for the readers. If the author can add some diagrams or visuals that would be another item to boost this already great document.