User:Kurt Krautmann/Eutrophication/Winde068 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kurt Krautmann


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Kurt Krautmann/Eutrophication


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eutrophication

Evaluate the drafted changes
Kurt,

You have a well written draft discussing ammonium sulfate treatment that will go into the remediation subsection of the eutrophication wiki page! If you find any images you could put those in either the mechanism or the introduction part to help readers better understand how this chemical will be affecting bodies of water. You also could combine the implementation and mechanism sections because they are related and then you wouldn't have such a short implementation section. If you want to keep them separate, just add more info if you can to the implementation section. Within the limitations section, readers may want to know how much organisms will be affected with this treatment as well as what the toxicity is to humans. In relation to sources, I see that your 5th and 6th references are a bit older, has there been a more recent paper that you could use? Overall, there is no bias in your writing content which is great because you simply need to provide the facts instead of persuading the reader of something.

Great work!

Natalie Windels