User:KushioRibeiro/Docking theory of olfaction/Kf7tgy22 Peer Review

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KushioRibeiro


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 * User:KushioRibeiro/Docking theory of olfaction


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 * Docking theory of olfaction

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Hey! So it looks like you've got some good sources here, but I wasn't able to find an outline anywhere in any of your sandboxes. Let me know when you've added an outline and I'll give some more feedback!

I've now been able to review your changes, and I just want to let you know that I think that the restructuring you've done is very beneficial! I like how you simplified the different non-covalent interaction in the first paragraph. I also like that you separated the part of the overview that was talking about previous models into its own paragraph. I wonder if this paragraph would be a better fit in the "History" section though. Also, the sentence that talks about how the two theories differ is still a little confusing for me. Maybe another sentence in between the two explaining how they are distinguished as different would be beneficial. I think you edited the last paragraph in a way that helped me understand it better. I really like your image; it helps me visualize it better. I wonder if there would be a way to show the non-covalent interactions in the image as well though.