User:Kuuleirich/Cooperative video game/G.O Memo Peer Review

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Kuuleirich
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 * 1) I enjoy the introduction part where it is very neutral and very which gives a whole concise and focused beginning into what the reader is getting into by providing the context of Co-ops
 * 2) You should have mentioned Mortal Kombat in how it changed the rating system and popularized fighting co-op games during the arcade era.
 * 3) I emjoy how each of the games menitoned is blue and has a link to research more into them and givevs us visually of what examples there are.
 * 4) Don't forget to put your citation here: "Early-generation home consoles typically did not offer co-op options, due to technical limitations which hindered the increased graphics required for simultaneous co-op play.[citation needed]"
 * 5) ^Same here: Later PC RPGs became more powerful and flexible in simulating the shared real life RPG experience,[citation needed]  and "(An earlier game, Vampire: The Masquerade – Redemption (2000) was the earliest CRPG to feature this sort of "storyteller" mode.[citation needed])"
 * 6) Also I recommend adding a conclusion to wrap up the main takeaways from the history of Co-ops,