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Wiki Page: Deep Ecology (Article Review)
This wiki page is one that would not receive a good rating. The intro paragraph into this article has a few run on sentences and doesn’t mentioned Arne Naess which I think is an important thing to be mentioned in the beginning article. Throughout the article, the general guidelines of 1 citation per paragraph is followed. I was unable to tell if there was any bias because the article seemed to do a good job of staying neutral. In the talk pages though, this was something that was being discussed. When reading the article there are places which are missing citations.

My comment to the talk page (Hypothetically):

Outdated Sources

Seeing as how the last comments on the talk page were made 11 years ago, a check is needed in the citations. When clicking on the links to references they are no longer working, available or accessible. The citation which is most unhelpful is #33, it is a link to a promotional website in another language. I’ll be looking at the rest of the links and flagging ones that no longer are helpful.