User:Kvanval2/Valkenburg Castle/ERivera1259 Peer Review

General info
Kvanval2
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Valkenburg Castle - Wikipedia:

Evaluate the drafted changes
Reading through the content that was added, I see that Kvanval2 added material to the body of the article. Reading through, I think that the information added is both relevant to the article and provides more useful information. The sources are current, and the information seems accurate. Overall, I like the information that was added, one thing that I would alter is the language and grammar. Some parts felt a bit broken or confusing at times. The other thing I would change is slight, but adding in links to the text where they would be relevant or needed. Other than that though, I thought Kvanval2's edits were great.