User:Kvauls/Infant mortality/Sierrabasden Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kvauls


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kvauls/Infant mortality - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Infant mortality - Wikipedia
 * Infant mortality - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added to the article is relevant to the topic and it is up-to-date. There is no content missing and this article does deal with Wikipedia's equity gaps. It does address topics related to historically underrepresented populations when it comes to the topic of Infant mortality. The content added is neutral to the topic and there are no claims that appear to be heavily biased towards any particular position. There are no points overrepresented or underrepresented and the content does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another. The new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information. The content accurately reflects the cited sources. The content is well-written, very concise and clear and it is well organized.

I believe the content added improved the article, it was very informative and seems more complete. The strengths of the content added was bringing more information to the Premature birth article like stats and percentages that make it easier to understand.