User:Kvhurley28/Schizoaffective disorder/Aclark00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kvhurley28


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kvhurley28/Schizoaffective_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Schizoaffective disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the revisions are done nicely and are very neutral; however, I do think there is more content to be added. I read in the original article that the diagnoses do not stay. So, something you could add is how it would be determined that person no longer has a schizoaffective disorder. You also could go more into detail about the statistics of a misdiagnosis and what the changed diagnosis is later determined to be. For you're addition in causes, make sure to differentiate what part you're adding. I thought at first the sentence that contains "I think" was part of the addition. Your sources appear to be reliable, and I clicked on a few to make sure the links worked.