User:Kwelsh1103/Popular music/SadPandaBear Peer Review

Hello, Kwelsh1103, I am attempting to provide a peer review on your selected article. I hope I am doing this correctly. I think a few areas that can improved upon in this article is:

I am not seeing a draft you have completed to to the below peer review. If have missed it please let me know.

The article could expand on the historical overview. A more detailed historical overview of popular music that includes key developments and trends over time.

The article could have more contextual information about the social, cultural, and political forces that influenced popular music.

The article could benefit from the inclusion of multimedia elements such as images, videos, and audio clips. This could help bring the subject to life and provide readers with a more immersive and engaging experience. ~

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)