User:KwokHy98/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
LVMH

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am interested in the luxury industry and LVMH is one of the biggest luxury goods group in the world.

Evaluate the article
In this article, only the introduction is updated, and other parts need more new information in 2020 and 2021. The article is outdated because we can find sentences like “The deal was expected to close by June 2020.” In the E-commerce part, there are only two sentences. It needs more evidence and explanation.