User:Kxngsultan/Military coups in Nigeria/Laylaadeyahmed Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kxngsultan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Military coups in Nigeria


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- lead is concise and provides a good introduction to the remainder of the article.

Content

- Does deal with equity gaps.

- brief overview of 3 coups before 1983. I wonder if more details could be added to these coups. There may well be little information on them but I'm wondering why the 1983 coup so detailed compared to the others.

- good work on patterns and effects of military rule! I feel like that really relates to what we've learned in class.

Tone and Balance

- I see no problems with tone or balance

Sources and References

- I see no glaring problems here.

Organization

- Do the effects of military rule have an effect on the current status?

Images and Media

- I'm not sure what images you could add here but visuals are always helpful if you find any that might be relevant to your page.

Overall: Good Work!