User:Kylaalexander/Twerking/75ridercarmen Peer Review

General info
Elyseturner, Kylaalexander
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Twerking
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Twerking

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section gives a good overview of what the term "twerking" entails and it gives a good overview of the content of the article. The content of the article is also fairly neutral as it highlights some of the bias in definitions given by the Oxford English Dictionary which "may fuel the stigma". The content is also very relevant to the topic article and is clearly written in a way that is easy to understand. Also the information in the article is backed up by reliable sources that support the information presented. The content is also broken up into sections that reflect the major points of the topic well. Furthermore, the article include images that enhance the understanding of the topic and are laid out in a visually appealing way. My overall impression of the article is that it reflects the topic well and it contains little to no grammatical errors. ~