User:Kylagauthier/sandbox

 .Article Evaluation 

Bibliography stayed on topic

Really cool to learn about the history

It's pretty nicely separated into different topics about bibliographies

Jimmy Wales stayed on topic, it was more about the history of his life and what he accomplished

He is the cofounder of wikipedia

There was a non-successful website before wikipedia that later became wikipedia

All sources were fine for both

However, citations were mostly from books

For either, none of the information was out of date but a few of the links didn't work

I felt as if both articles were equally represented

The Jimmy Wales article was an B class article

The Bibliography was a rated start class

Both of them were WikiProjects

 Potential articles 

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Animal_ethics

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Animal_rights


 * may need to be shortened and reworded

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Criminal_Justice_Act_1953


 * does not cite any sources

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Life_imprisonment


 * this article is said to need more citations and to improve the article in different ways

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Practice_of_law


 * add more of a world wide view

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Effects_of_marriage


 * psychological effects
 * expand on negative and positive
 * children
 * divorce effects- do certain types of marriages lead to divorce
 * different types of marriages
 * financially

 Possible sources for effects on marriage article 

https://aspe.hhs.gov/report/effects-marriage-health-synthesis-recent-research-evidence-research-brief

https://dta0yqvfnusiq.cloudfront.net/ampartnership/2016/12/Scott-Phelps-Sun-Times-OpEd-Marriage-Rates-12-7-16-161207-584890953e11c.pdf

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3558785/

http://healthland.time.com/2011/01/11/what-your-brain-looks-like-after-20-years-of-marriage/?iid=sr-link5

http://time.com/4358792/woman-age-married-how-long/

https://www.bls.gov/opub/mlr/2013/article/marriage-and-divorce-patterns-by-gender-race-and-educational-attainment.htm

https://www.bls.gov/nls/nlsy79.htm/

 Starting on effects 

Same Sex Marriage:

It is found that in same sex marriages, marriage has a more positive effect than negative. Single persons in the same sex world happen to be more distressed. In contrast to same sex marriage, heterosexuals have the lowest psychological distress. Lesbian, gays, and bisexuals who are not in a legalized marriages have the highest psychological distress. It appears that marriage diminishes mental health issues between people in the same sex community.

Traditional Marriage:

Healthier people in marriages may have a better chance of having a successful marriage. Due to the fact that a healthier person may be more appealing to their partner. Married people are generally happier than unmarried people. It is said that marriage can affect your health in many ways. For example, having a higher income could improve the health care you receive or lower stress. In certain marriages, a spouse may help in monitoring and encouraging healthy behaviors. As well as discouraging unhealthy habits. Marriage may provide an emotional fulfilling relationship. Which would satisfy the need for a social connection. This could have implications on a person's physical and mental health. Marriage is able to reduce depressive symptoms for both men and women. As marriage is able to reduce them, divorce is able to increase them.

Marriage can also be associated with less healthier behaviors. For example, alcohol consumption, drug use, cigarette smoking, diet, and exercise.

 Divorce: 

As time goes on, many changes have affected divorce and marriage rates.

Approximately 43% of people who get married at ages 15-16 get divorced. The rate for college marriages ending up in divorce, is a little less compared to high school. It happens to be 30%. Divorce rates decline as educational attainment increases. It is also said that people who marry later are less inclined to get divorced.

''' Differences Between Sex, Race, and Education. '''

In opposition to men, women are more likely to get married and remarried. They are also more likely to get married younger. In comparison to Hispanics and Whites, Blacks were less likely to get married and more likely to get divorced. People who did not complete high school were less likely to get married over people who did complete high school.

 Polygamy: 

Polygamous marriages can have negative effects on women. Many women experience feelings of neglect and jealousy. Men often times are not fair when it comes to equally splitting their time. Although they may desire to be, they are not. It is possible that women rarely see their husbands or rarely have their needs met. This not only applies to women, but also their children. The severity of the negative effects depend on the tolerance and patience of the wife. In more serious cases, it can range from depression, tantrums, or illness.