User:KyleGorczynski/York Haven Diabase/Sailarca Peer Review

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"These are inundated with intrusions, with all of them being primarily tholeiitic." I would change tholeiitic to basaltic, it's easier to understand. I would also cite this sentence.

"The York Haven Diabase was previously thought to be Triassic in age, however a map published in 1980 by the Pennsylvania Geologic Survey provided evidence for the diabase to be Jurassic in age." You could link Triassic to the Triassic wiki page, and also cite this Geologic Survey.

In the leading paragraph, you could elaborate on the Gettysburg Basin (i.e is it also primarily basaltic? is the entire basin Jurassic? Is it one of the oldest or youngest units in the basin?)

"The York Haven Diabase, named after York County, Pennsylvania, can be found across many counties. These counties include Adams, Berks, Buck, Chester, Cumberland, Dauphin, Lancaster, Lebanon, Lehigh, Montgomery, and as previously stated, York." Are these all counties in Pennsylvania? it is unclear here.