User:KylePasco/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Emilia Cruz

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because I am a big fan of her artwork and while this article is very concise, I found it to be lacking a lot of important details about the artist.

Evaluate the article
The lead section does a good job at describing who Emilia Cruz it, but does not mention the major sections that the article discusses. This articles content is up to date and provides relevant information about her notable work. The article does not include the meanings behind some of her artwork however and the social issues that Emilia Cruz tackles through her work. The article has a very neutral tone to it which is great. This article also provides a great amount of credible sources for each of the topics it mentions. The organization of this article is also very clear and neat making it easy to look for and understand the topics presented. There are no images included which is a bit disappointing considering half of the article is talking about three specific and notable pieces of art she has created. It would have made this article a lot more interesting and informative to see those pieces of art with clear captions underneath them. There are no discussions on the talk page, however this article was rated as Start-Class through both Wikiproject Biographies, and Wikiproject Women Artists meaning that it is a good start but is lacking in many areas. This article's strengths include its structure, it's neutral tone, and it's credible sources. This article could be improved with the addition of artwork images, artwork meanings, and social issues the artists tackles with her art. I would assess this article as underdeveloped but with a good foundation to build off of.