User:KyleiMontgomery/Video vixen/Amffma Peer Review

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KyleiMontgomery


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 * Video vixen
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 * Video vixen

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This was a very educational article. I loved how you went beyond explaining what a music video is and beyond examples of video vixens. Your explanation on the different opinions on video vixens is important in order to learn, and showing which video vixens have had a successful career following their work in music videos. My favorite part was the explanation of female rappers presenting themselves as video vixens. Very well done.