User:Kylemorin23/Catholic Church in Colonial Rwanda/Huandrew1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kylemorin23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kylemorin23/Catholic_Church_in_Colonial_Rwanda?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft is loaded with information and you also have a good number of sources. I think the "role of religion" section seems a little out place with respect to the content of the rest of the article, and I would either move it later down or just delete it. Also, if possible, it would be beneficial to include links to other wikipedia articles in your draft, such as to the Hamitic hypothesis. Otherwise, I think your page looks good and will be great for the community.