User:Kylerstrickler/Risk communication/BrettGyd57 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kylerstrickler


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kylerstrickler/Risk_communication?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Risk Communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the lead of the article and think that it helps get a very understandable definition of risk communication and how it can relate to things like crisis communication and public health as just a few examples of the different things that risk communication is a part of. That helps understand the scope of risk communication. I like that you go into how it is different from crisis communication and think that can also help differentiate risk communication from crisis communication and is a great thing to mention to keep the focus of risk communication for readers. Lastly, I like the use of examples at the end of the lead to show how risk communication is used in dealing with food borne illness and in personal medical decisions.

in the body I like that you go into the two different types of risk communication before getting into the challenges section because it helps the reader understand the two different levels of risk assessment and how they might be performed on each level. In the challenges section I think that you do a good job of describing the different challenges that both the Government risk assessment and the nutritional risk assessments face. Overall I really like your article and think that it is straight forward and from a neutral standpoint as well.