User:Kyleruss311/Childbirth in rural Appalachia/20Amayer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kyleruss311


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kyleruss311/Childbirth in rural Appalachia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Childbirth in rural Appalachia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I definitely can agree with you here that the article you are editing does not include enough information about this subject but your edits are quite biased. Although this topic is very sad and needs a lot more information, I think you need to include more of a medical outlook on things rather than stating your opinion right off the bat. As we know wiki articles are meant to be unbiased so I think changing some of the information would really benefit your edits. Overall I can tell that you are really motivated to write more about this topic and that is really beneficial.