User:Kyliehc/Forest conservation in the United States/Marigonz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dlulozun and Kyliehc


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Kyliehc/Forest conservation in the United States


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Forest conservation in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The additions made so far are adding law and polices under the techniques of forest conservation. Maybe to expand this section more or for future wiki edits on this page is to create a whole subsection dedicated to Law and Policy on these forest conservation techniques. I'm assuming each technique may have their own policy, so it may be tricky to formate it better. You can also add talking about law and policy in the Lead section as well. Wiki even acknowledges that the lead section to this article is lacking and could benefit with additions.

The content added is neutral and does not show favor to the law being implemented. It is stating a fact from a reliable source. This is starting really well!