User:Kyliehc/Forest conservation in the United States/Noodleslovespapriko Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) kyliehc and Dlulozun


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kyliehc/Forest_conservation_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Great job on improving the quality of the article, your writing was concise, understandable and well written. The timeline on laws and policies is helpful for understanding how the government and other groups are combating deforestation. You have helpful intext citations, but I would add more references where there are specific regulations and financial statements so readers can gain a better understanding of where the information is coming from.