User:Kylierubel45/Child mortality/Brendanboylan123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)Kylierubel45


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kylierubel45/Child_mortality?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Child mortality

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I really like the images that are being used in this article. They are both relevant to the information that is in the article. The only critique I would make is with the captions. I think that, if possible you should try and add some more details to your images. Your image with the child and the doctor should definitely have some more details. I would recommend trying to find out if the child in the picture has some sort of illness and where exactly the country of origin of this picture is. I also think that for the graph you should write leading "causes" rather than "cause". Other than that you did a great job and chose very good images. Keep up the good work!-Brendanboylan123