User:KylinZX/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Film

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This lesson discusses Chinese films. I choose this article because it can provide me with the most basic knowledge about this course. And the concept of film is very popular, so even though I am not a professional learner, I can read it and find out the problems worth evaluating as much as possible.

Evaluate the article
The director part of this article clearly introduces the concept of film and quotes a quotation. However, the introduction number is small, so the director part is not convincing enough. The article covers all aspects of the film. The article is neutral and the author does not bias arbitrary opinions. But some of the facts in the article are not supported by evidence or quotes. The historical aspect of the film is also too brief to be detailed enough. The tone of the article is objective and free of heated words and statements expressing positions. But the author often says "somebody said that..." But there is no specific source. Generally speaking, the biggest problem of this paper is that the literature cited is not detailed and comprehensive enough. The use of images is also less engaging and less relevant to the content. This article is rated C because it has some significant shortcomings. But it is a complete article and the way to improve it is to read the "facts" in the article one by one and add appropriate literature as evidence to support it.